Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, environmental
issues
are
one of the most crucial concerns of humans around the world. In
this
regard, a group of citizens believes that the
environment
's bad conditions
are
related to the extinction of some herbal and animal species. While there is another group of people who think these
are
not the only and most important problems in
this
field. The most tangible
parts
of our surroundings
are
alive creatures.
That is
because humankind needs vegetables and meat for survival, so these
are
the most Considerable part of the
environment
for him, and declining diversity and the amount of these two could turn to a disaster in human life.
For example
, in China, the overuse of dogs meat lead to danger for their life. If the reduction of organic creatures goes on, it may changes the ecosystem and hurt us;
that is
to say, all of these
are
related to each other.
This
is undeniable that what we call "
environment
" is beyond living things. It could be much more significant, from the ozone layer to the floor of the oceans. The reason for neglecting these critical
parts
is that humans
are
not directly engaged with these
parts
because the sky is high. Most people don't live
next
to shores, and
also
, the
issues
related to these
parts
of our planet usually come out gradually so that some people do not understand their effect as clear as the other
issues
.
For example
, the pollution of the sea not only affects fish and other residents of the sea but
also
comes back to cities in acidic rain form. I believe the
environment
is much broader than organic phenomena, and maintaining all
parts
is a human's duty. Of course, not only conserving but providing the setting for its flourishing is our job. In conclusion, there
are
two arguments about environmental
issues
. One says the essential part of it is animals and plant's life, while the other says these
are
not the major problems. I think our planet is our home, and taking care of its
environment
is our priority, and it concludes every phenomenon around us.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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