Prison is the common way in most countries try to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
Prison
are
commonly used in many Change the verb form
is
countries
to solve the causes of crime
. On the other hand
, increased
literacy Correct article usage
an increased
rate
is the more effective solution.This
essay agrees with the statement because it gives us employment and development
.
First
of all, By providing education
to as much
Change the quantifier
many
people
you can show a decline in crime
rate
because the more they study
then
they can get to know what is good for them but also
what is bad to them as well as the more people
study
then
they can induce in the jobs
. Through, Which we can see a dramatic decrease in the crime
rates like educated people
will indulges
in their Change the verb form
indulge
jobs
they don't get time
for thinking about these things. So, government
should have to publish the scheme as well as Add an article
the government
law
to increase the Add an article
a law
the law
education
facilities through which those who cannot afford their study
material can also
get study
through policies.
Secondly
, As educated people
don't get time
to think over those topic
because they have many project from their Change the determiner
that topic
those topics
jobs
and returning back from their jobs
at night,evening ,etc. Althrough
, The remaining Correct your spelling
Although
time
they want to spend with their family,friends and others to enjoy their life as well. Which put them away from crimes and usually educated society used to spend their time
gaining and learning new skills is also
a positive development
and shows reduction
in Add an article
a reduction
the reduction
crime
rate
as well as
Add the comma(s)
, as well as this,
this
helps in development
of the country like many developed Add an article
the development
countries
have high literacy rate
than the developing and undeveloped countries
. Therefore
, Developed countries
are advanced than other underdeveloped and developing countries
in many aspects like health, infrastructure. However
, Countries
have to spend more on education
as well as in health
care field. So, That more the Correct article usage
the health
people
are educated and healthy more will be the growing nation.
To conclude, I strongly believe that education
is beneficial in reducing crime
as well as and development
of the country.Submitted by a.sanchit17 on
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