Parents often buy their children many toys. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children having a large number of toys?

Nowadays, children receive a number of

toys

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childhood and

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fact

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could have some beneficial and adverse consequences. In

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essay, I will discuss

pros

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the pros

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and cons and

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the child's

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behaviour.

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, I think one of the most disadvantages is that a child, who has got many

toys

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, can not really understand the real value of the object, in

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, sometimes, especially the youth, we have

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too

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two

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things that we do not know,

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, I

remeber

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remember

when I opened my wardrobe and I found

cloeths

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clothes

that I did not know to have. The same topic is around the

toys

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for children

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fact

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more tools for playing they have, more of them they would like to have because the will never be

fullfilment

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fulfilment

and there will be always a lack of

somethings

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. The

fact

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is provided by the past when our grandfather used to play with only one or two

toys

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and they enjoyed more what they had

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of our society.

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having many games can be useless, I believe

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that if

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parents would like to make happy their kids, they can gift a toy and

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is

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a beneficial

things

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for older people in light

on

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of

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the

fact

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that I

remeber

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remember

when my mother used to buy an object for me when I was good in something

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when I got a good mark at school or when I scored during the football match. In conclusion, in my

opinion

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there are some adverse consequences in having a number of

toys

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because the children will not

apreciate

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appreciate

them but it is

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important to gift something as

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