Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are many concerned individuals who feel that
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from various cultures and generations can be brought together through
music
. Others,
however
, feel that it can not be a proper way of connecting our society. I completely agree with the former statement and in
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essay, I will support my view with examples. In today's world,
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has become a way of communicating our feelings and thoughts. Sometimes, we struggle to find
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to convey our emotions and at that time we just prefer to go with
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that can do the magic. For
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example, On
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independence
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day celebration, we often play patriotic songs to encourage our young generations or during a festival
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we tend to
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hymns.
Moreover
,
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nowadays
, due to modern
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technology
, we can hear a
song
from any corner of the world.
For instance
, If we use
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application, we can search for any
song
that we want to hear. One
such
example is the Gaana Application. In
this
software, we can look for a
song
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sung by a famous artist from
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.
Additionally
, there are many
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shows where anyone can participate irrespective
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religion or country.
Such
television series can become a great reason
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overcoming
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religious differences and teach us to value human talents.
Moreover
, we can use
music
to grow our creativity and assist us to become more expressive. In recent
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it has been proven that
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music
can help an individual to fight
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his fear and anxiety. In conclusion, even though we can still notice a significant amount of gap between two communities, I strongly believe that
music
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strength to combine human beings of different backgrounds.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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