Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV shows, advertisements, fashion and follow the same brands. To what extent the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

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Due to the advancement of technology, the
world
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has become one big place.
People
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are viewing the same shows, they are using the same social media sites, and they have the same sense of fashion. There are some benefits and drawbacks to
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trend, and I will explain why I believe the benefits far outweigh the negatives. Nowadays,
people
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from all over the
world
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are more similar to each other than ever before. There are
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of advantages to
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.
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,
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will understand each other more. They are more aware of other cultures, thanks to the diversity of actors on the tv shows,
people
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are able to see the cultures and habits of TV stars on the other side of the
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.
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, regardless of where
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live in the
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, they will begin to have similar views. Because they have the same idols that they love and imitate, they will start to become more alike, and eventually have similar views.
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will reduce the conflict globally.
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, there are some disadvantages to
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phenomenon. Before, countries had unique
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identities
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and
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cultures
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.
People
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would enjoy travelling because they would be fascinated by the different cultures and habits. They would try new cuisines and explore the unique architecture.
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,
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is no longer the case, now
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the majority
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of European countries speak English, eat
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and the public wears the same brands. The special identity is lost. I think in the near future
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may cause identity crises in the upcoming generations. In conclusion,
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there are some disadvantages to the
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becoming one homogenous place, I think the benefits overshadow the negatives.
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way, the conflict between countries will decrease.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural homogenization
  • interconnected world
  • dilute unique cultural identities
  • global media
  • dominance of multinational corporations
  • cultural imperialism
  • consumerism
  • materialism
  • global products
  • traditional cultural values
  • innovation and creativity
  • exposure to global ideas
  • local creativity
  • traditional practices
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