Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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A number of persons these
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believe we have so many
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to make, I strongly agree with
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and will be discussing my reasons in
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essay. One of the reasons why I agree that we have too many
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is due to the fast increase in the availability of information in form of
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internet
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People
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now have
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vast access to information from the
internet
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which opens them up to many
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they have to pick from.
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, in those
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,
people
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are familiar with the kind of foods that are native to their environment and culture but nowadays
people
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are able to learn how to cook other foods from other cultures and countries because they can find a step by step process to of cooking on the
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and
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gives them plenty of
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to make as regards to that. Another reason I feel there are multiple
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these
days
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is the high rise in the recent technological age. There is now a technological alternative to almost everything these
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,
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; examinations used to be taken in form of paper and pencil/pen in those
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but now
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have become an alternative.
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, interviews used to be conducted physically but lately, interviews can be done via Skype and these are
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that
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to be made now that
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one-way. In conclusion, many
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these
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feel we have so many
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to make and I agree
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it strongly because there is a vast variety of
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on the
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and a rise in technological changes gives
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alternative
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to make.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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