You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Write a letter to you new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution

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Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I had recently cleared the interview for the post of Software Engineer at Ecolab, but I am writing to inform you now that I will not be able to join the organization on 15th November due to some medical emergency in my family.

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week, my mother was diagnosed with tuberculosis, and she is struggling with her health since

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. As I am the only person to look after her, it will not be possible for me to join on the scheduled date since I do not expect her to recover by

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. I am extremely concerned with the lack of speed of her recovery. I have had consultations with the doctor who believe that it will take her 2 more weeks to recover. She will be on medication till

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and will need my continuous support. Due to

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, I will be available to join the company only by 29th November. To make up for the time lost, I will be devoting 2 hours extra

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in order to complete my pending deliverables. I have communicated the same to HR and she has acknowledged my situation. I apologize for the inconvenience caused and thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Abhinaba

Submitted by abhinaba.de on Fri Aug 20 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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