Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty.
There are opposing views about the death
penalty
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for savage crimes which some advocate and some refute. Both theories have advantages and disadvantages.
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penalty
for those who commit a horrible crime that has some useful effects. Use synonyms
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punishment
can prevent more people leading to crimes especially savage ones. Use synonyms
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case, it prevents the killed person’s family to revenge by themselves.
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punishment
for the offenders who committed brutal murder has some disadvantages. Use synonyms
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, it may cause people to become cold-hearted by watching or informing from several executions. Linking Words
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cold-hearted do not forgive each other and the violence rate may raise in society. Afterwards, sometimes the death Linking Words
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the governments try to address those drawbacks in order to reduce the crime rate.
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of solving them. So to speak, it will be beneficial to get help from psychologists and other experts to release the crime rate.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...