Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others however, believe that scholl is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Discipline and punctuality are two qualities

which

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every human being should have. Many

thinks

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that it is a job of

parents

to teach

children

how to be a good citizen of

society

, whereas other think that they should learn it from school. I agree with the

first

thought and in

this

essay

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will present my arguments and provide my opinion.

Firstly

,

children

spend

majority

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the majority

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of their

time

at home with their

parents

. So

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of

parents

will be much more on them. So it is

a

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job of guardians to teach them and make them aware with a concept of respect, to every fellow citizen in the

society

.

For example

, they should provide a

role

model in their

life

or they can become a

role

model for them and provide them

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comfortable environment to learn, to respect each other.

Secondly

,

parents

should

also

teach their

children

about their duties towards

soceity

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society

, it helps them to build a character.

For instance

,

parents

should encourage kids to participate voluntarily in social work and community services.

Last

but not least, money management is

also

a quality which should be taught them by their guardian as it helps them in their in

budget

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in future.

On the other hand

,

teachers

also

plays

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an important

role

in every

students

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life

. It is impossible for kids to learn each and every

aspects

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of

life

from their folks, in

such

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case

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,

teachers

should come and play their

role

.

For example

, school is the best place to teach

them

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value

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the value

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of discipline as it is a hard quality for

parents

to teach their kids. Discipline not only helps each individual but in

generalize

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it helps to develop a better nation as each citizen are aware of their duty and

role

in the

society

.

In addition

, punctuality and

time

management are two important aspects of

the

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life

. These two virtues should be taught to students by their

teachers

. In

such

case,

teachers

should give them some task to complete within a limited

time

and who gets succeded in completing them within a

time

limit, they should be rewarded and make them a

role

model for others. To conclude, I reiterate my opinion that it is a job of

parents

to teach

children

how to be good members of

society

, but it is

also

important that in some aspects

teachers

and

school

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the school

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also

play their

role

in

this

process and make each

children

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child

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a

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good citizens.