Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

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consider that

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can be good parents more than

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. For

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reason, everyone thinks that

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are suitable to take care of their

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the most.

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, others agree that

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good at parenting

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as

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. In my point of view, I concur that

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are gentler to be ready

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their kids.

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, they have a better power to raise their

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.

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, every mother is so kind to their daughter or son.

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is very common for all residentials. It cannot be denied that

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have a better sense to look after their

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. A perfect example of

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is mothers always prepare breakfast, the school uniform, and teach them homework.

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, mothers will be the person who

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their kids need.

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that both

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and

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are

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. They can be the perfect parents. Especially, fathers have

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and lead their kids to do the right things. To illustrate, daughters usually share the stories and

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their fathers. Because they might think that no one can blame them if they do something mistake.

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will compromise them all the time.

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,

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have skills

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can encourage their daughters. In fact, all

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feel more comfortable when they talk to their father. In conclusion,

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are more likely to be good parents more than

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. Because they can be a consultant to their

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as

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study, friends, and food, etc. Alternatively,

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will be a person who

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their kids’ secrets. So, everyone will prefer sharing experiences with fathers when bad things happen to them