You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: Why you cannot pay the rent When you will pay the rent. How you will ensure you can pay your rent in the future

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Dear Mr Black, I’m writing

this

letter to regard difficulties with paying the rent

this

month. There are financial problems that have happened to me. I was suddenly dismissed from my

last

job and now I need time to find a new place. I didn’t expect that things could turn out

this

way and

unfortunately

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I don’t have any savings. I was wondering if you would be able to wait for one week when I would apply for a new job. If I couldn’t take up employment, I would definitely do my best, find the money and pay you the whole rent in exactly one week. I would like you to know that in the future, I will do my utmost to ensure my ability to pay the rent on time. I am willing to do regular savings in order to provide you

timely

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payment. I look forward to receiving your response. Sincerely, Dmitrieva Anastasia

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coherence cohesion

You have successfully used a logical structure, with clear paragraphs and progression of ideas.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate, demonstrating understanding of the format for a formal letter.

coherence cohesion

Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to strengthen coherence.

task achievement

Make sure to address all bullet points from the prompt fully, providing specific details for each.

task achievement

Ensure that the writing tone remains consistent and suitable for the context of a formal letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

155 words

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