IELTS 13 - Exam 2 - Writing Task 2 Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, we are

surronded

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surrounded

by a large amount of

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choice

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choices

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such

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as travelling almost everywhere, buy a lot of

stuffs

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stuff

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. We can do almost everything and for some people, it is too much. Actually, some people think that we are living in a world where nothing is too big. Do a journey along the world seems to be possible, buy a new expensive car is

abordable

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affordable

. All these behaviours come from our society of

overcompsion

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overcompression

but,

also

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because we can

moove

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move

faster thanks to technology

such

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as plane, or train. We

also

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can speak with someone who

live

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lives

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the other side of the earth with

Internet

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the Internet

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. It is

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if nothing is impossible. Indeed we have a lot of

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choice

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choices

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thus

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children are sometimes lost. We could do so many activities, meet so many peoples, do so many jobs or studies. It is the abundance.

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that is

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true that before, we

where

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more at home. We were going

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countryside

contryside

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the contryside

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during

hollydays

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holidays

. It was probably

more calm

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calmer

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. Moving far away from home was not even though. We sent some

letter

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letters

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in order to keep

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contact

between

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with

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acquintance

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acquaintance

acquaintances

. We didn't have all these distractions that social networks give to us.

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, during the 19th

centuries

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, women couldn't work. They must stay at home in order to take care of her children.

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, they couldn't vote and at school, they were taught to be a good and quiet wife.

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, men

where

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often following their father's job. At

this

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time, we had less

choice

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than today.

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some

point

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,point

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it might be easier to do not

have

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to have

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the

choice

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. But, most of

time

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the time

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it may look like jail to not be able to do what you want during your life. In conclusion, I believe that we have a couple of

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choice

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choices

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today, which is a

benefits

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sometimes but not always.

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, I prefer to have much more

choice

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than not enough.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

327 words

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IELTS 13 - Exam 2 - Writing Task 2 Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Your opinion

Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?

Some people believe that to reduce industrial pollution, a tax should be imposed on companies, while others believe that different measures should be taken to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some claim newspapers are the best means to get the most recent information because they have more influence than other forms of media.to what extent do you agree or disagree?