IELTS 13 - Exam 2 - Writing Task 2 Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, we are
surronded
by a large amount of Correct your spelling
surrounded
choice
, Fix the agreement mistake
choices
such
as travelling almost everywhere, buy a lot of stuffs
. We can do almost everything and for some people, it is too much.
Actually, some people think that we are living in a world where nothing is too big. Do a journey along the world seems to be possible, buy a new expensive car is Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
abordable
. All these behaviours come from our society of Correct your spelling
affordable
overcompsion
but, Correct your spelling
overcompression
also
because we can moove
faster thanks to technology Correct your spelling
move
such
as plane, or train. We also
can speak with someone who live
Replace the word
lives
in
the other side of the earth with Change preposition
on
Internet
. It is Add an article
the Internet
like
if nothing is impossible. Indeed we have a lot of Change preposition
as
choice
, Change to a plural noun
choices
thus
children are sometimes lost. We could do so many activities, meet so many peoples, do so many jobs or studies. It is the abundance.
On the other hand
, that is
true that before, we where
more at home. We were going Replace the word
were
at
Change preposition
to
Correct your spelling
countryside
contryside
during Correct article usage
the contryside
hollydays
. It was probably Correct your spelling
holidays
more calm
. Moving far away from home was not even though. We sent some Replace the words
calmer
letter
in order to keep Fix the agreement mistake
letters
on
contact Change preposition
in
between
Change preposition
with
acquintance
. We didn't have all these distractions that social networks give to us. Correct your spelling
acquaintance
acquaintances
For instance
, during the 19th centuries
, women couldn't work. They must stay at home in order to take care of her children. Fix the agreement mistake
century
Also
, they couldn't vote and at school, they were taught to be a good and quiet wife. Moreover
, men where
often following their father's job. At Replace the word
were
this
time, we had less choice
than today. In
some Change preposition
At
point
it might be easier to do not Add a comma
,point
have
the Fix the infinitive
to have
choice
. But, most of time
it may look like jail to not be able to do what you want during your life.
In conclusion, I believe that we have a couple of Add an article
the time
choice
today, which is a Change to a plural noun
choices
benefits
sometimes but not always. Change the noun form
benefit
However
, I prefer to have much more choice
than not enough.Submitted by eve.gilquin06 on
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