Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion

Some individuals think it is relevant for a

child

to attend

school

while others

belief

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is that, to the

latter

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the teaching should have done at

home

.

However

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there are benefits for both methods I believe one is better than the other. It should be noted

that is

more expensive to give to a

child

his personal

teacher

whereas is more convenient to bring the pupil to

school

, so,

in addition

, it poor people could not afford to hire a private

teacher

.

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addition

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staying at

home

could enable the

child

to be more concentrated than going to

school

because he is alone with the

teacher

while going to

school

,

by contrast

, would help the

child

to socialize and

this

could by result make the

child

more open and more confident.

Furthermore

, hiring a

teacher

to stay at

home

with the

child

will definitely remove the commuting time and

this

can be advantageous for the parents meanwhile bring them to

school

could take a lot of time especially if the

school

is in the middle of the city and there could be traffic. Apart from

this

studying at

home

is a true advantage if the

child

is affected by some severe disease

such

as SLA or if he can not move,

this

thesis is enhanced by the fact that some schools had and still have architectural barriers and is clearly difficult for them to access the educational building.

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it is truly important to understand that going to get an education in a place other than

home

or get it at your private address can be advantageous either way.