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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

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In the modern
world
, technology has created easy
access
 for
people
 to download copyrighted songs and
books
 from different sources without any cost. In my opinion,
although
 it has some disadvantages,
advantages
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the advantages
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 outweigh the disadvantages. Getting more accessibility on these
things
 can help
people
 to extend their
knowledge
, though it has
piracy
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 problem. On one hand, there are many benefits to obtain free
access
 to different types of
music
 and
books
. In today's
world
, a majority of the
people
 are still living under
poverty
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the poverty
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 line. It is really difficult for them to buy these
things
in
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online.
For example
, in Africa, most of the
people
 are living under
poverty
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the poverty
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 line and it would not be possible for them to purchase
such
things
 which
are really need
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are really needed
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 for expanding their
knowledge
. So, easy
accessbility
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accessibility
 is created by modern technology badly helpful for the
people
 to increase their
knowledge
 level. Again, if
a
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people
 can able to get easy
access
on
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to
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 these items, they definitely will give something to the
world
 by learning from those
things
.
Consequently
, every
people
 will get
oppoptunity
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opportunity
 to accomplish something worth in the
world
 by learning from different types of
books
 and
music
.
On the other hand
, some problems have been arisen
becasue
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because
 of
free
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the free
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access
of
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to
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 melodies and
books
in
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apply
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the
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online. There are some songs and
books
 which are restricted to share everywhere.
Furthermore
, sometimes
people
 sing a song or create
a
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music
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music
, and write a book for earning purposes,
additionally
, it has piracy
restriction
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restrictions
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 as well. Sometimes it may be discouraged the actor or writer
for
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from
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 making innovative somethings in the following days.
For example
, in Bangladesh,
a
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music
 which is named " Aynabaji" was so much popular among the mass
people
, but it has lost its popularity after spreading to some of the internet sites and youtube as well.
Thus
, the
music
 creator and writer are lost their interest gradually. To conclude, though making
accessible
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it accessible
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 to download
music
 and
books
 have some drawbacks, it
really
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 beneficial for everyone who wants to enhance their
knowledge
 in those sectors. It is recommended to create a platform for the mass
people
 so that everyone can get
access
 using only some rules and regulations.
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