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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Every
country
have
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it's
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 major allocation in three sectors i.e. National Security, Education and
Health
Services
. These three factors determine the pace and growth of the
country
 and how it is
contributng
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contributing
towards
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it's
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 citizen's
health
 and well being.
However
, among these three factors,
Healthcare
Services
 plays the most important role. The subject of
Health
 is vital and access to quality
healthcare
 is
right
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 of every individual. No one in the world
,
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 wants to fall sick but in case someone
incure
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ensure
incur
 any critical illness it becomes very difficult to pay the premium prices at private hospitals. For countries like India, which is
densly
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densely
 populated, innovation in public
healthcare
 is a dire need and building
right
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 infrastructure to make
health
services
 accessible for all, is something which
government
 should really focus on. In my opinion,
health
services
 should be easily available for every individual. Our
Government
 should issue
health
 cards or regulate the quality of
services
 being offered in a hospital setup on regular basis. It is not important to make it completely free but everyone should be benefited and
specially
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 people below
poverty
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 line.
Also
,
government
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the government
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 can regulate the prices for essential
life saving
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 drugs and make sure it is easily available to all the layers of
economy
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the economy
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. Per capita income and household income can become deciding factors for allocating free
services
.
For example
: a person who has no
health
 insurance, have no job and have critical illness should become
'1st
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 priority
healthcard
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health card
healthcare
 holder' whereas, a person who has stable income,
health
 insurance and no illness should be entitled
with
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 '2nd priority
healthcard
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health card
healthcare
 holder' To summarise, every
country
 should have free
healthcare
 as every individual works directly or indirectly to contribute towards
it's
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its
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country
's economic and social development.
Therefore
, in return, it becomes
responsibility
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the responsibility
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 of every
government
 to work towards providing free and quality
healthcare
 to the citizens.
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