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Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #cars #cities #source #pollution #waste #industries #ones
Some
people
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, that deterioration of the climate
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 is caused by
cars
 while others
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 that industries are
the
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causing more.
Although
cars
, undoubtedly, cause a detrimental effect on the urban environment, the catastrophe industrialism creates is
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way bigger. In my opinion, I
believes
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 that industries
causes
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most
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 disastrous to the environment.
Firstly
,
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 to over 20 years there are many
cars
 in the cities nowadays. Most of them are using petrol and diesel for running. These are the main factor affecting
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society.
On the other hand
. when the car
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 sold for scrape the metal waste
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 burnt or dumped in lands. Both
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reverse
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 effect when it is burnt the ashes cases
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people
 to inhale it and it takes more than 20 years to decompose.
However
, many
people
 believe that introducing new taxes for vehicles in order to reduce their number is a viable option.
In addition
 to
this
, developing public transportation can be solved too. On the flip side, it is clear that many factories produce a lot of waste and pollutants. Factories are accounted as
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 main cause of the environmental problems in
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urban areas, especially in industrial cities.
For example
, many ecologies blame the industries
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the
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global warming and climate change. Dyeing
factory
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factories
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emit
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 the
waste water
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 in the nearby rivers which
makes
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 the water not useable. In conclusion,
although
 many individuals blame
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factories and
cars
 on
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environmental issues, personally, in my opinion, I believe that they are equally guilty on these questions.
However
,
people
 are able to solve the problems by utilizing eco-friendly products and introducing new taxes for the car.
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