Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

In the midst of

this

technology-driven global world, the way of

parents

, take care of their

kids

also

changed .Most of the

parents

gifted their

kids

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lots

of

toys

for playing

.

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In

this

essay , I will be telling the drawbacks and positives of the foremost topic.

Firstly

, over the past few

decades

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human thoughts and mentality changed towards

the

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life and relationships.

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Even though

,

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New-generation

guardians love their

kids

,

however

,they don'

t

know how to express it in

a

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right way. On the one hand , they think that, if they presented

lots

of

toys

to play

for

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their

kids

, they will be happy, but it is not true actually. Ostensibly , they will be happy for

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few days

then

they will get bore with that

purticular

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particular

toy and they just throw it out,

this

is the

first

disadvantage of the same.

Secondly

,

younger

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generation won'

t

understand the value of money,

for instance

,whenever they ask for something

parents

are ready to give it,

therefore

they are not getting a chance to realise how hard it is to make money.

Thirdly

,

kids

are not able to keep their things safely , as they have

it

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more than they need, they don'

t

care about it.

Lastly

but not least , most of the

toys

are indoor based,

hence

they are not interacting with others who are

in

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their

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same age, so their social interaction and sharing behaviour will be less.

On the other hand

,

Newgeneration

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New generation

New-generation

kids

are happy to have

lots

of

toys

, they will be satisfied by

this

. By getting more gifts from their

parents

or relatives they think that they loved them

alot

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a lot

. The main advantage of

this

is

kids

remain

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in-home

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in

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home

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, so you can keep an eye on them

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since we are living in a dangerous era,as our

kids

are getting kidnapped and

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of child abuse increases day by day.

Next

, if

kids

going out,

parents

won'

t

be knowing with

whome

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whom

they make friendship .Admittedly, from childhood children are getting addicted to drugs and all so at

this

senario

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scenario

its

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better to have our

kids

in

home

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the home

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. To make our children sit in

home

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, it is

necessory

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necessary

to gift them

lots

of different types of

toys

. To put it in a nutshell , I pen down saying that, encouraging

kids

by presenting various types of

toys

make them happy at the same time

parents

try to develop sharing habit, social interaction and their academic skills.