New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that new technologies,

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the internet, and various ways of trading goods are undeniably having a major influence on today's society. To a certain degree, I completely agree with

this

notion and that the reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, majority of the social media

such

as Facebook and Instagram

are not only use

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for communicating but

it

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is

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also

use for marketing purposes.

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,

by

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using famous

celeberaties

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celebrities

and uploading on the websites would definitely

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myriad

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youth's

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attention.

For example

, cosmetic companies usually advertise on

internet

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instead

of using billboards and posters as

this

gradually become a useful

way

to promote or introduce new

products

to

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people.

In addition

, there are lots of ways to boost your adverts and posts about your product together with the tools to select targeted audiences.

Although

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this

only cost a few bucks,

this

is the most effective

way

for both the consumers and the sellers as they could readily purchase the

products

with a minimum effort.

In addition

, applications like vinted help the consumers to buy and sell the

products

in a much

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easier

way

as they don't need to put an extra effort by roaming around the city just to find a customer or just to sell their quaint

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furniture

furnitures

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furniture

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and clothes. All they have to do is just a click to purchase the

products

that they want online.

This

also

helps save both

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time and

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effort by sparing more time to spend with family or friends.

Therefore

, as

this

method is easy unlike traditional stores where you have to browse for ages to obtain a

particuar

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particular

good that you are looking for,

plethora

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of people tend to embrace

this

way

of trading. To sum up, it is really obvious that the advancement in technologies

have

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overwhelmed

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society, providing

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much more

convinent

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convenient

ways to purchase and sell goods.