Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that forcing young children to do

voluntry

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voluntary

work

during their leisure

time

would not only have

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positive

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impact on

themseleves

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themselves

but

also

on their whole

societies

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. In my opinion, I completely disagree with

this

statement because it

distort

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and

demolish

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the true meaning and the

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essence

of volunteer. Some would claim that asking the teenagers to volunteer in projects during their free

time

would provide

this

category

a

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well round

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prespective

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perspective

about the importance of helping others without expecting any

montary

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monetary

return from

this

work

.

This

is because they tend to waste their

time

in

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doing useless activities,

such

as playing video games and chatting with their friends online, which divert their attention from focusing on allocating

time

for giving back to their community. For that reason, it would open their mind to the virtues of contributing to their societies.

Although

this

way might teach teenagers about the advantages of doing unpaid

work

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themselves as well as their communities, it would not help them to effectively embrace the concept of volunteering.

This

is because if they are forced to volunteer, it would become more challenging for them to understand the moral value of offering help to others, and

therefore

they are more likely to find

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to avoid giving back to their communities and start thinking of what benefit themselves not others. A typical example of

this

is that when a school ask young students to participate in charities campaigns

such

as cleaning parks

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and taking care of

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after school, a high proportion of them never shows up or expresses their dissatisfaction as they believe that they

are still have

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the freedom to choose how to spend their

time

.

As a result

, teenagers could form wrong opinions and ideas about volunteering. To sum up, requiring youngers to

preform

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voluntary

work

whenever they have

time

would help them to understand how

this

work

could contribute to their personality and societies.

However

, I would disagree with

this

point of view because it might push them to discard the valuable lesson they could get from

this

job.