More and more qualified people are moving from poor countries to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine . some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people , rich countries are stealing from poor countries.others feel that this is the only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. discuss the both points of views.

Public

libraries

are the

access

for culture and knowledge.

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, some people would like

that

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governments

make

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the

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investment in building public

libraries

in every town,

wearas

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whereas

others think it is a waste of money because we have

access

to information via the

Internet

. In

this

essay, we will discuss both

point

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of view and I will give mine.

Firsty

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First

, some people believe that

libraries

are important because

that is

the

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easier

access

for

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news, history, science and more. It has

also

be supported that not everyone

have

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a

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good

access

to the

Internet

,

thus

limiting

libraries

is the birth of inequalities inside cities.

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More over

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, we do not have only

access

with

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knowledge,

their

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is

also

old documents, CD and even movies. We can borrow a couple of things without paying which is

a huge luck

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.

Furthermore

, it is a quiet place, with silence and respect, students can learn or do their

homeworks

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homework

here.

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, it might

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as a waste of money because we can see a lot of news without

magasines

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magazines

, we can

also

read some books on our

phone

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or learn lessons thanks to video oder many websites.

Although

,

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that is

not real, we can not really touch a paper. It is just a screen. But, there is probably more

informations

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information

pieces of information

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on the

Internet

than in

a

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libraries

a library

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libraries

. In despite, we need to

double check

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anything we read because it might be wrong.

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, we need to be aware

on

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of

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each site we are going because

,

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we can not trust everything without

beeing

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being

sure.

Finally

, I believe that it is a good

things

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to do .We need to keep these

building

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buildings

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, where we can have some moments of peace, and if we can have more, we will be able to develop curiosity . We can not count on the

Internet

for everything, especially for something

such

important as culture !