The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances. Some people regard this change as an improvement, while others believe that it is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

We are living in a world where the Internet starts to take a lot of places. Indeed, even physical shopping has been replaced by online shopping. It is the birth of a lot of controversies. In

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new form of shopping.

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, for many people, shopping online is easier because you can buy whatever you want, whenever you want. Accessing

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has never been so easy, whereas in stores some stuff

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sometimes out of stock.

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, everyone can stay at home and just wait with nothing to do. As it is faster as well it

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like magic. For

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reason, many people

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method especially,

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living to the

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, living far away from the city takes a massive time, from 30 minutes to one hour, just to see the edge of the town. But, it is a nightmare

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hidden behind all

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wonderful process. Indeed,

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of markets is one of the sad consequences . The centre of the town is less attractive and a couple of stores are suffering a decline

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funds because of

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. We have some issues with an increase

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poverty in

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departement

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it is the spark for many people to lose their job. To conclude, I believe that it is killing human lives to only count on the Internet. Networks are funny but not when they take

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some job to a good citizen.