Present a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership.

I am writing
this
email
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to explain
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explain
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explaining
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my ANZ bank
account
statement. There was a big amount transferred to my personal
account
. Please see the information below. As you can see from my ANZ Online
Account
statement, on 06 July 2021, there were two big amounts of $1,017.65 and $1,187.80 deposited into
this
account
. I concur that they came from the person whom I used to exchange money overseas . For
this
reason, it was a better currency rate and convenient. At that time, the rate was $1 per 22.65 THB (Thai Baht).
Hence
, I transferred the total money of 49,953.44 THB, which come from my personal Thai bank
account
(Kasikorn Bank) equal $2,205.45 NZD to my New Zealand
account
.
I
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amI
wasI
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confident that
this
information which you are given is true. Thank you for considering my application. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me on
this
email ([email protected]).
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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