You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. What is the article about? What is the error? What you expect an editor to do?

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Dear

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, I am writing

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letter to you regarding the recent

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you published about

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David Markham

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week, April 2nd, in The Times newspaper. The

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gives a brief biography of

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David’s life and

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continues to focus

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and the impact it has had. The biography starts with his birth in Edinburgh and his later move in 1962 to Durham University. From there, it focuses on his

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with the UN. I would like to point out an error in your

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. Documentation shows that

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David did not go directly from Edinburgh to the University of Durham, in 1961. In

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he took a gap year in Europe working with a volunteer program and

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went to University in 1962. I know

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as I worked with him in Europe and became friends with him. His year abroad, which is absent from your

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, created the foundation of his philosophy of life which guided him through his

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in later years. I hope you will publish

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correction in the newspaper.

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David’s

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is still of immense importance and people should know the importance of that gap year in his life. Looking forward to a positive reply. Yours faithfully, Hardik Patel

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

209 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Gap between rich and poor countries. It's the responsibility of richer countries to support poorer countries while others think it's the responsibility of poorer countries. what is your opinion?

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Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, what measurements can governments and individuals take to respong to this problem?

Some people believe in the proverb that where there is a will, there is a way. They think that if the desire is strong enough, they can achieve anything. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this belief?