people should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traditions are the roots of each country.

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transport history and background of every land. Nowadays, we have frequently some societies who immigrate in order to live outside of their own country.

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the floor they want to stay. In

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land is described by these inhabitants and their

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. Each society, where humans are living, is lead by many rules.

For instance

, Indian's tribes are used to sleep inside tipees, and

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their bodies thanks to natural ink.

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are

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, they believe in animism and attribute to everything on earth living and non-living things a spirit.

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others way of thinking might be hard to understand, when a person is welcomed by someone he does not know, somewhere he

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no ideas about, he must learn rites and ways of lives in order to be accepted.

On the other hand

, travellers did not stay for a long time in town they go through.

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often supports that some rules are tricky to follow because

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they are too far away from our everyday habits.

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a clear example, in arabo-musulmans countries, women do not have the same rights as men.

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a journey, sometimes changing our own behaviour is too difficult to do. For

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reason, everyone needs to find a

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balance with his

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ideas in order to deal as best as possible with others

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. To summarise, being adaptative is

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key to be able to travel everywhere.

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must

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be aware

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their behaviours, without offending, they need to respect

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themselves as others.

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, I believe that when people start to live in a new country, they should follow the customs. After all, travelling is one of the most enriching activities, it allows everybody to be more open-minded !