The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed. But it has created problems that did not exist before. what are the serious problems associated with the internet and what suggestions.

Internet
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has a huge success
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in changing
the nature and
enviornment
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environment
of the
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world
. It has changed the life of the
people
to great extent. In
this
worldevery
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world every
thing has its own benefits and problems so does
internet
has its own pros and cons too. Here
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will discuss
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what problems are faced due to
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and how to eradicate them. The
first
and the big problem is personal communication.
People
are so much busy
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social sites as they do not interact with
people
personally. So to reduce
this
kind of problem
people
should organise social programs and invite the members of the society to take part in
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as
people
can interact personally. Another serious issue children spent
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of time surfing on social media, playing games on
internet
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and watching movies which in return
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affect
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effect
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affect
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their study and they do not do any physical type of activities or play some sports which is very essential to keep
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good health. Parents should keep a close eye on the
performnce
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performance
of the child and teach them what is best for them.
Internet
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has created has another big problem by providing
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information about
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illegal things and
actitvities
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activities
.
For
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it teaches about how to prepare weapons
such
as bombs and machines guns which is very dangerous for the
soceity
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society
.
Moreover
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internet
banking has
its
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much easier to
tranfer
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transfer
money from one account to another but it has given
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to
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the
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hackers to look into your personal banking details.The government of the country should take it seriously and frame
such
laws that will put
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of
people
behind the bars. In
conculsion
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conclusion
, humans should understand what are merits and demerits of
internet
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and they should use the
internet
for their own and
benefits
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the benefits
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of their society. They should
also
find
best
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possible way to reduce the negative impact of
internet
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.
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