Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. Why do they think so? What can be done to change their views?

Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. And
that is
because of various reasons but mostly for the reason that when tourists visit a country they show defiance towards that nation's customs and traditions and promote their own western cultures which have bad effects on the mindset of that nation's population. In
this
essay, I will discuss the perspectives of people as to why they consider foreign travel a bad thing and
also
the solution that can change their views. In my opinion, I believe international tourism is important for a state.
To begin
with, there are reasons that caused many folks to consider globe travel as a bad thing for their country.
Firstly
, travellers promoting their western customs and causing folks of that state to
also
follow those cultures. Resulting in, their own heritages disappearing in the process.
Secondly
, these globetrotters act defiant towards rules and regulations in entering a sacrilegious place.
For instance
, while entering a holy place one needs to take off shoes, cover their heads and body properly but these backpackers do not seem to care about those rules. And
lastly
, they cause pollution by throwing plastic bottles and bags everywhere.
On the contrary
, foreign travellers are important for a nation as it provides us with an opportunity to learn about the western customs and broaden our horizons.
Therefore
, the perspective needs to change and that can be done with some aid from the government.
For example
, the government can issue laws like while going inside a sacred place everyone needs to follow rules and whoever would not
pays
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a heavy fine.
Consequently
, fines for causing pollution and placing more trash cans around the city. To conclude, like the two sides of a coin there are both advantages and disadvantages to a certain thing. To enjoy the benefits we must find ways to change the downfalls into advantages. As mentioned earlier in
this
essay, I hold the view that foreign globetrotters are important for the bright opportunities that come along with them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Environmental impact
  • Over-tourism
  • Pollution
  • Natural habitats
  • Cultural erosion
  • Economic dependency
  • Resource strain
  • Sustainable tourism
  • Eco-friendly practices
  • Cultural heritage
  • Infrastructure
  • Diversification
  • Empowerment
  • Awareness programs
  • Visitor limits
  • Off-peak tourism
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