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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are they advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

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It is commonly believed that A growing number of individuals are purchasing products online. Internet shopping is certainly
convinent
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convenient
 and a cheaper option for people as well as commercial establishments. But there will
also
 be some drawbacks. One Evident benefit of
e shopping
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 is it saves
time
. It is a
well known
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 fact that
for
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a
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shopping
socieities
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societies
 can browse the items online and make their selections without stepping out of their house and their commuting
time
 can be saved.
For instance
, college students can place their choice of products through
E- commerce
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 websites
such
 as Amazon and
flipkart
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 without physically going to the market. In short
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buying online enables
time
 management. Another advantage is goods and services are cheaper when availed through E-market. Undoubtedly, the products are inexpensive as the online marketing companies provide promotional offers and
inventives
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incentives
inventive
 to the customers all
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year round
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.
On the other hand
, there are obvious disadvantages as purchasing online
invloves
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involves
 financial risk. It has been observed that if debit and credit card details are used
carelesly
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carelessly
 it can invite intruders to hack the financial data which can eventually harm the shoppers. A good example of
this
 was seen in Australia where a person lost all his wealth through online
transaction
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 while shopping on a new
webite
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website
websites
. In conclusion, while there are plus points to having online
purchase
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such
 as
time
 saving and low priced goods
as a result
 hacking would happen.
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