In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is travelling. It is undeniable that locomotions have become an essential part of our life. There is a forecast that the vast majority of people will trip
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their own
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, guess that individuals will travel abroad more compared to nowadays. It is well known that modern automobiles, planes and ships are faster, cheaper and more comfortable in comparison with
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century.
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, these reasons show us that voyages to different
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become easier.
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, citizens can go
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and more frequently. Another reason why I disagree that people will not journey in their homelands
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there is a great number of agreements among the government of various
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about non-visas travelling. Taking
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Euro Union, I think that it stimulates
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go
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abroad for getting new emotions of visiting new places around the world. Evidently, everybody knows that there are
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which are like icons of
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paradise for any human,
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, almost everyone wants to visit them. A good example here is Australia or the USA. At the same time, some states try to attract new tourists because tourism is an extremely important part of
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of any land, especially of islands
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as Cuba or Bali.
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, social network like Instagram is
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advertisement of exotic lands. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis I can say that I absolutely disagree that most people will travel in their own
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but not abroad.
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