Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is

apparant

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apparent

that the

severity

of

crimes

have

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execerbated

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exacerbated

worldwide over the

last

century. Some

people

advocate that

punishment

should be dire regardless of

comitted

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committed

crime.

However

, others disagree and have

this

belief that other factors should be taken into account upon sentencing the perpetrator

such

as the reason and motivation behind and

severity

of the crime. I

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with later than

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, as there is no direct link between

severity

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the severity

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of crime and

length

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the length

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of imprisonment or fixed

punishment

. The

crimes

has

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become more harsh and violent than ever before. Some

of

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attributable

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factors are poverty and

ever-increasing

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widen

gap

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the gap

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between rich and old communities. It is agreed that some

people

are too dangerous to be rehabilitated e.g.

people

with a pathological mindset

such

as murderers and rapists, and these should be imprisoned for their own sake and the sake of others. Unless they

truely

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truly

show remorse for their actions and demonstrate

trust-worthy

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behaviorer

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behaviour

behavioural

on appeals, they should be remained locked without

possibility

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of release.

However

, it is not justifiable for all

kind

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of

crimes

. Most

of

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crimes

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the crimes

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are committed by young generations who

lives

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in

the

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town with already high rates of

crimes

. Reasons for committing

crimes

could be that delinquents are looking up to other older

og

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or

more experienced criminals or they are seeking

excitements

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.

For instance

, in the movie entitled "Sleepers", a group of four children

accidently

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accidentally

kill a random male, and they sentence to

the

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jail time. Here, it is imperative to consider all the

aspect

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behind the event before deciding

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long-term

punishment

.

People

committing minor

crimes

such

as

thieft

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theft

lifting or stealing money for drugs or food should not be imprisoned but

instead

should be sentenced to do community work which is more suitable to combat the

crimes

, as they are not dangerous to other

people

. By involving in activities in a community, not only the delinquents will accrue some important skills but they

also

gain a responsibility towards their fellow citizens and increase their self-esteem. In conclusion, sentencing dire

punishment

to all criminals regardless of

severity

is not counter-productive and will not bring the rate of

crimes

down. Every case

need

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to be analyzed and handled independently. A rehabilitative approach could be more suitable in the vast majority of cases.