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A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. To what extent what do you agree or disagree?

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In
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 in technology and
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,
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 have become capable of studying
English
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 on their own privately
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 of attending a formal class.Some people argue that
students
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 might encounter some obstacles in their studies as they lack the guidance of an instructor.I disagree with
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 statement to some extent.In
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exposure
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 that
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.As long as we are interacting with
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language
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 on a daily basis by some means
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 or radios and even speaking
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 online with a mate from Western countries,we can somehow improve ourselves to
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 degree.
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,the contents available on the
internet
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such
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 as Youtube,chrome and telegram are quite reliable.It is pertinent to mention that learners can
study
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English
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 anytime,anywhere as long as the
internet
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 connection is
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accessible
.
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,unlike formal learning courses in which we cannot opt for the most suitable time to
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, the
convience
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convenience
 and efficiency of
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internet
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 might promote the mastery of
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students
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English
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.
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,despite having limited time to
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 in
language
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 classes,
students
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 can learn and practise as much as they want on the
internet
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,albeit not very systematically.It is undeniable that the more a student practises, the more proficient he will become. On the
otherhand
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other hand
,in some cases, the role of a formal course cannot be underestimated.A well-experienced pedagogue can correct our mistakes, enhance our
knowlege
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knowledge
 and comprehension,provide some special tips and indicate the most efficient way to
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.
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,a student might not be monotonous easily owing to the competitive peers and motivating teacher,whereas he might get tedious
studing
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studying
standing
 alone without an
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. To recapitulate,I am convinced that individuals can
study
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 notwithstanding some drawbacks.Since online learning will only cost
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bill
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,
students
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,regardless of any financial background, are
accessible
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 to almost every helpful resource.So,being able to keep in touch with
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 anytime and having access to a manifold of sources on the
internet
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,
students
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 can learn and be fluent and proficient in
English
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 even without the guidance of a teacher.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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