Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree.

Nowadays new educational methods have been brought up which no longer include corporal

punishment

. Unfortunately, some

parents

still believe that spanking is the best option to discipline their

children

.

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on a behavioural level, physical

punishment

is the worst educational method that I totally disagree with, given that it has dangerous effects on

children

’s psychology. Still to date, smacking

children

is considered the best form of education by many

parents

, especially among certain demographics. One of the main reasons could be the belief that the fear of corporal

punishment

is essential to control infants’ manners.

For example

, several old educational books suggest breeding the character through fear of physical punishments and strict discipline. On another side,

this

violent approach could be out of

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mind and, despite having received

this

kind of hard education himself, one may replicate it into his own

children

. In fact, more than 80% of

parents

claim that they have beaten their

children

up at least once during the

last

year and do not believe it to be detrimental

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standpoint. Basically, many

parents

tend to rely on inflicting pain as they struggle to control their

children

. Despite being a good and rapid fix to control bad demeanour, beating

children

up is absolutely wrong

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the long run. In

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, a more verbal oriented education will help the young generation internalize the reasons

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why to adopt

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certain conduct

instead

of another.

Furthermore

, the fear of the

punishment

is not as strong as the respect of the parental role from the child, and, in some cases, it could

also

trigger worse reactions out of the infants and lead to adult psychological dysfunctions.

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, many behavioural scientists have proven that the strongest

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to improve

children

’s morals and habits is to lead by example and to communicate with them. In light of

this

, psychologists all around the world stood up against smacking

children

as a form of teaching. In conclusion,

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essay argued why spanking

children

is not a good way of teaching.

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method, in my opinion, despite

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on a superficial look according to someone, involves several downsides and should be absolutely avoided in favour of a newer communication-based approach.