Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree.

Nowadays new educational methods have been brought up which no longer include corporal
punishment
. Unfortunately, some
parents
still believe that spanking is the best option to discipline their
children
.
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on a behavioural level, physical
punishment
is the worst educational method that I totally disagree with, given that it has dangerous effects on
children
’s psychology. Still to date, smacking
children
is considered the best form of education by many
parents
, especially among certain demographics. One of the main reasons could be the belief that the fear of corporal
punishment
is essential to control infants’ manners.
For example
, several old educational books suggest breeding the character through fear of physical punishments and strict discipline. On another side,
this
violent approach could be out of
subconscious
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mind and, despite having received
this
kind of hard education himself, one may replicate it into his own
children
. In fact, more than 80% of
parents
claim that they have beaten their
children
up at least once during the
last
year and do not believe it to be detrimental
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standpoint. Basically, many
parents
tend to rely on inflicting pain as they struggle to control their
children
. Despite being a good and rapid fix to control bad demeanour, beating
children
up is absolutely wrong
on
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the long run. In
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, a more verbal oriented education will help the young generation internalize the reasons
of
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why to adopt
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certain conduct
instead
of another.
Furthermore
, the fear of the
punishment
is not as strong as the respect of the parental role from the child, and, in some cases, it could
also
trigger worse reactions out of the infants and lead to adult psychological dysfunctions.
For instance
, many behavioural scientists have proven that the strongest
elements
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to improve
children
’s morals and habits is to lead by example and to communicate with them. In light of
this
, psychologists all around the world stood up against smacking
children
as a form of teaching. In conclusion,
this
essay argued why spanking
children
is not a good way of teaching.
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method, in my opinion, despite
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on a superficial look according to someone, involves several downsides and should be absolutely avoided in favour of a newer communication-based approach.
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