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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and other are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

#animals #verge #extinction #list
As well known, humans are one of the most important reasons to lead
animals
 dead.
Therefore
, more and more
animals
 are being listed on the endangered list even many
animals
 have already disappeared anymore. Here
are
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 the main point to lead the situation. Development of industry must be the most serious reason. Due to zillions of industrial factories had been constructed in those years, not only the rivers around factories be polluted but
also
 numerous
forest
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forests
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 had been cut down.
Therefore
 , it caused
animals
inhabits
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 decline so that they must migrate to other strange places and different
environment
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.
Moreover
 , polluted water
also
 can make fish and other
animals
 drink polluted dead. Another extremely point must be climate change. Nowadays , The earth climate‘s temperature is rising steadily which bring about iceberg are melted. Thousands of
animals
 who are living in the Arctic and Antarctica lost their inhabitants. According to these serious problems, the best measurement to handle it would be the government set new rules to limit people's actions.
Such
 as, the local government needs to limit the number of polluted air emissions from each factory. Establish a strict requirement for the use of electricity，each household limits the maximum power consumption according to the population. After that , everyone must establish a fantastic habit to reduce the waste of resources. When we are going outside , we can choose public transportation rather than drive our own cars. To conclude , humans can't live on earth without
animals
. Everyone has to take action right now to protect the
enviornemt
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environment
 and save resources
,
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 so that we will give our a bright future.
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