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An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry. Why do you think it is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, the demand
on
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 trips to other
countriescountries
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countries countries
, especially during vacations, has been significantly increased all over the world. For many developing
countries
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 it has emerged to be a suitable area for developing and expanding. In
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 essay, I will examine the reasons for
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 a trend and why it could be risky for
countries
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 to maintain only one particular area of income.
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 of all, tourists have been considered as the main source of profit of economy for most
countries
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. Even though hotels and transport
sould
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should
could
 be organized for visitors, still tourists spend a lot of money during vacation days.
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,
besides
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 the
accomodation
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accommodation
 expenses, which they pay for in advance, they spend a lot on entertainment events,
souviners
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souvenirs
 and extra trips to historical sites, which are provided by hotels.
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, an enormous amount of many visitors spend within one territory.
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, I think that
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 area
shoud
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should
 not be the main source of revenue for
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countries
country's
countrie’s
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the countrie’s
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 economy.
Occasionaly
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Occasionally
, while governments heavily rely on tourism income, they abandon the
developing
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development
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 of other relevant directions. In the case of some diseases,
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, like the
Coronovirus
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Coronavirus
, which leads to limited possibilities for
trevelers
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travellers
 to visit other different
countries
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,
such
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 places will be faced with inevitable hurdles because they are unable to make money on tourism anymore. In conclusion, the constantly increasing inflow of people to
country
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the country
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 can make up a substantial proportion of the government’s
buget
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budget
, but
still
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 other ways of earning money are needed to be determined.
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