An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry. Why do you think it is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the demand

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trips to other

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countries countries

, especially during vacations, has been significantly increased all over the world. For many developing

countries

it has emerged to be a suitable area for developing and expanding. In

this

essay, I will examine the reasons for

such

a trend and why it could be risky for

countries

to maintain only one particular area of income.

First

of all, tourists have been considered as the main source of profit of economy for most

countries

. Even though hotels and transport

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should

could

be organized for visitors, still tourists spend a lot of money during vacation days.

For example

,

besides

the

accomodation

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accommodation

expenses, which they pay for in advance, they spend a lot on entertainment events,

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souvenirs

and extra trips to historical sites, which are provided by hotels.

Thus

, an enormous amount of many visitors spend within one territory.

On the other hand

, I think that

this

area

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should

not be the main source of revenue for

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countries

country's

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economy.

Occasionaly

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Occasionally

, while governments heavily rely on tourism income, they abandon the

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of other relevant directions. In the case of some diseases,

for example

, like the

Coronovirus

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Coronavirus

, which leads to limited possibilities for

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travellers

to visit other different

countries

,

such

places will be faced with inevitable hurdles because they are unable to make money on tourism anymore. In conclusion, the constantly increasing inflow of people to

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the country

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can make up a substantial proportion of the government’s

buget

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budget

, but

still

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other ways of earning money are needed to be determined.