Big companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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companies
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develop
countries . After Change the form of the verb
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globalization
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,globalization
companies
around the world have done wonders in the market and they are able to make huge profits. Some experts argue that these companies
should take the responsibility for physical and social upliftment of the
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society
. I am partially agree
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partially agree
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government
for the glorification of Correct article usage
the government
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society
but today Giant companies
also
taking part in it like Microsoft , Reliance , Apple , Google, JWS sports
etc.
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Sports
more over
they are organizing blood donation camps Correct your spelling
moreover
also
. By doing these noble work, these giants are adverting their brands , helping the government
to empower the society
& also
provide better
life to the talented people of their Add an article
a better
country
by sponsoring them For example
Reliance which is one of the leading company
in India . They built Fix the agreement mistake
companies
non profitable
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this
they are showing their presence in the Add a comma
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country
and also
publicizing their products like JIO , mobiles. This
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pieces of stuff
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showing their power in the country
, due to which many foreign invertors
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investors
companies
are investing in Reliance .
But there is another face
of the coin Correct your spelling
facet
also
. These companies
will do good deeds when they will get good returns from it otherwise
they will do nothing. It is correctly said by the elders that if anyone is doing something for someone, the same is expecting in return. Basically to make society
better , upgrading the sports
all these are the responsibility of the government
of the country
. Government
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The government
also
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government
also
started promoting the Add a missing verb
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sports
like Orissa is now sponsoring Hockey for next
10 years.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite