Many people think happiness relies upon the responsibility of individuals, others think that is affected by other factors. Discuss both views and state your opinion

How do we find

happiness

? It has always been a huge question for humanity. Some

people

believe that it relies upon the responsibility of individuals, whereas

others

support that, it is affected by other factors.

This

essay intends to discuss both arguments and I will give my own point of view.

Firstly

, there are different ways to find

happiness

. Some

people

think that it is a feeling you must choose in order to enjoy it.

For instance

, whether someone is focused only on the noteworthies moments of his life,

then

everything that has happened , will appear as if it was for the best. Indeed, even if someone has experienced pain, some

people

support that it is just a tiny time to suffer,

then

something better will come.

Then

, everyone has his own description of

this

, but often, it is defined as the feeling of being full. But, being full is

also

subjective because you can see somebody with nothing material but so much richness inside him

such

as experiences,

meeting

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meetings

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, adventures... For

this

reason, being happy is just a

habbits

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habits

habit

to have. Trying to see every little thing which

happen

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happens

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during your daily routines

such

as the sunrise in the morning, the smile of a pedestrian and

others

.

On the other hand

, some communities believe that being happy is up to exterior factors

such

as money or high status in society. As they believe that, their own description of

this

, is directly linked to the

others

. Obviously, having

much

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money, makes events easier.

For example

, buying whatsoever is possible., but quick pleasure does not make

people

beaming because

that is

just material, while

happiness

is finding peace inside your heart, not on the outside with your appearance. Finding who you are is being able to be independent and detached from

others

views. To conclude, I believe that everyone needs to find themselves before ask for more things

such

as objects, love ,

important

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an important

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job or

awarness

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awareness

. Finding a good comfort

such

as

happiness

is a tricky balance to find between how you are feeling in your own body, with your soul and with

others

relations. In the end, finding peace is the same thing, it comes when you start to be a sighted person .