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Many people think happiness relies upon the responsibility of individuals, others think that is affected by other factors. Discuss both views and state your opinion

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How do we find
happiness
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? It has always been a huge question for humanity. Some
people
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 believe that it relies upon the responsibility of individuals, whereas
others
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 support that, it is affected by other factors.
This
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 essay intends to discuss both arguments and I will give my own point of view.
Firstly
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, there are different ways to find
happiness
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. Some
people
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 think that it is a feeling you must choose in order to enjoy it.
For instance
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, whether someone is focused only on the noteworthies moments of his life,
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 everything that has happened , will appear as if it was for the best. Indeed, even if someone has experienced pain, some
people
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 support that it is just a tiny time to suffer,
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 something better will come.
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, everyone has his own description of
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, but often, it is defined as the feeling of being full. But, being full is
also
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 subjective because you can see somebody with nothing material but so much richness inside him
such
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 as experiences,
meeting
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meetings
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, adventures... For
this
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 reason, being happy is just a
habbits
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habits
habit
 to have. Trying to see every little thing which
happen
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happens
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 during your daily routines
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 as the sunrise in the morning, the smile of a pedestrian and
others
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.
On the other hand
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, some communities believe that being happy is up to exterior factors
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 as money or high status in society. As they believe that, their own description of
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, is directly linked to the
others
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. Obviously, having
much
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a lot of
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 money, makes events easier.
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, buying whatsoever is possible., but quick pleasure does not make
people
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 beaming because
that is
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 just material, while
happiness
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 is finding peace inside your heart, not on the outside with your appearance. Finding who you are is being able to be independent and detached from
others
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 views. To conclude, I believe that everyone needs to find themselves before ask for more things
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 as objects, love ,
important
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an important
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 job or
awarness
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awareness
. Finding a good comfort
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 as
happiness
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 is a tricky balance to find between how you are feeling in your own body, with your soul and with
others
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 relations. In the end, finding peace is the same thing, it comes when you start to be a sighted person .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • individual responsibility
  • personal mindset
  • proactive steps
  • self-improvement
  • socio-economic status
  • relationships
  • environmental conditions
  • external factors
  • positive attitude
  • pursuit of happiness
  • facilitate
  • hamper
  • proactive engagement
  • sense of achievement
  • conducive environment
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