Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the world is developing rapidly and
the
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people
's living standards are improving a lot than the
previous time. Change preposition
in the
Therefore
, some people
believe that the youth generation have
too many Change the verb form
has
choices
in their lives. In my opinion, I partly agree with this
statement, but there are some backdraws
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back draws
of
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to
this
. In this
essay, I will give some opinions about this
statement, especially in studying.
On the one hand, people
have lots of choices
to decide what they learn in university because the youth have the chance to access many sources of information and explore their hobbies in
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at
the
early age. Correct article usage
an
Therefore
, they able
to make their own decisions to learn Add a missing verb
are able
in
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at
higher
level. Correct article usage
a higher
That is
different from their parents
' s period, many people
had to give up their studying
to find a job for earning moneyReplace the word
studies
,
or get married to obey their family. Remove the comma
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In addition
, nowadays people
can choose to start up their own business or not. There are many organizations to provide money for the
creative ideas from the youth.
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On the other hand
, some people
do not have the right for
their Change preposition
to
choices
in studying. Many younger people
live with their strict parents
who want their children to learn what parents
want. Students can not pursue their dreams because they have to satisfy others' desires. Moreover
, some women in the
undeveloped countries are unable to go to school due to Correct article usage
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the
religious rules. Correct article usage
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For instance
, many Afgan girls are not allowed to learn in schools and they are forced to stop their studying. These girls have no choice except obeying
the rules, but they are fighting for their Change the verb form
to obey
right
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
rights
people
in the twenty-one century have may
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many
choices
in their lives which
compares to their Correct pronoun usage
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parents
, but in some cases
many Add a comma
,cases
people
are still struggling with their rights, especially in getting the
permission to go to school.Correct article usage
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