Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the world is developing rapidly and
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people
's living standards are improving a lot than
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previous time.
Therefore
, some
people
believe that the youth generation
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too many
choices
in their lives. In my opinion, I partly agree with
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statement, but there are some
backdraws
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back draws
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this
. In
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essay, I will give some opinions about
this
statement, especially in studying. On the one hand,
people
have lots of
choices
to decide what they learn in university because the youth have the chance to access many sources of information and explore their hobbies
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early age.
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, they
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to make their own decisions to learn
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higher
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level.
That is
different from their
parents
' s period, many
people
had to give up their
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to find a job for earning money
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or get married to obey their family.
In addition
, nowadays
people
can choose to start up their own business or not. There are many organizations to provide money for
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creative ideas from the youth.
On the other hand
, some
people
do not have the right
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their
choices
in studying. Many younger
people
live with their strict
parents
who want their children to learn what
parents
want. Students can not pursue their dreams because they have to satisfy others' desires.
Moreover
, some women in
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undeveloped countries are unable to go to school due to
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religious rules.
For instance
, many Afgan girls are not allowed to learn in schools and they are forced to stop their studying. These girls have no choice except
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the rules, but they are fighting for their
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. In conclusion,
people
in the twenty-one century have
may
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choices
in their lives
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compares to their
parents
, but in some
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many
people
are still struggling with their rights, especially in getting
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permission to go to school.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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