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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

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Nowadays, it is frequently said that
people
 do not
getting
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 along with their
neighbours
 compared with the past. In
this
 essay, I
wil
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will
 try to find the reason why and
then
 I will say what, in my opinion,
the
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people
 can do for improving their
relationship
.
Firstly
 I think that the most important thing is that the
people
 must be positive and,
in addition
, they want to create a stronger contact with others who live close to them, in fact, sometimes, someone
decide
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 to live alone, cutting off the
relationship
 with other
people
.
Moreover
, I believe that in
the
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modern society there is a sense of independence from the rest of
community
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the community
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 due to the fact that we are connected by
Internet
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the Internet
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 and we do not need anymore a
fisical
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physical
 contact like
the
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 past years
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, therefore,
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therefore
 the
people
 preferred to stay home
instead
 of going out and talk with
neighbours
.
Although
 the use of Internet decrease the social
relationship
, I think that it is important to improve a sense of community where you can join and,one example, could be the
naissance
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renaissance
 of several initiatives among
people
 who live in the same area, like football match or parties where they can meet and have fun
alltogheter
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altogether
. In conclusion, I believe that having a good
relationship
 with
neighbours
 is essential in light
on
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 the fact that you can feel part of a group and for
this
 reason, for the
next
 years, it is important to improve the contact thanks to projects and where the
neighbours
 can spent time and maybe become
friend
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a friend
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.
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