The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
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The pie charts compare the proportional online sales for four different categories in New Zealand over the period of 10 years, beginning from 2003. In general, what stands out from the charts is that
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portion of e-commerce sales in New Zealand, in 2003.
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film and music had
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share of online shopping in 2013. As is given in the diagram, in 2013,
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which was the first stream of revenue, in 2003, experienced a fall,
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8%. Film and music,
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among the other categories. If we compare those two charts, it is easy to say that there was a slight increase in the proportion of books, at
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3%, in 2013, whilst the share of clothes in comparison with its state, in 2003, dropped moderately, by 6%.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • E-commerce
  • Retail sectors
  • Growth rate
  • Decade
  • Decline
  • Trends
  • Online transactions
  • Consumer behavior
  • Market share
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Digital era
  • Accessibility
  • User-friendly platform
  • Market dynamics
  • Predictive outlook
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