Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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the fact that nowadays youngsters spend a lot of time

in

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watching

television

as compared to

the

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earlier times.

This

has both pros and cons. Some of them are mentioned in the below paragraphs. The

first

and foremost advantage of watching more

television

by

children

is that

television

will help

children

to learn new things. Mostly

children

like

cartoons

, and nowadays

cartoons

are created to provide

knowledge

to

younger

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generation. There are shows which teach good manners and provide

knowledge

in the form of

cartoons

. Through

cartoons

,

children

learn many things which they cannot learn

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theoretically.

Furthermore

, another advantage is that

television

helps to keep the

children

at home. Some of the parents do not want to let

children

go out of the house as they are afraid that

children

can get any injury while playing outside and they can

also

get in the company of bad people.

However

, there are certain disadvantages as well of watching more

television

by

children

. One of the

disadvantage

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is that it causes health problems in

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children

. As

children

will watch more

television

, they will not do any physical activity, they will be exposed to many health problems, including obesity and loss of eye-sight. Statistics have shown that

children

watching more

television

get early health problems as compared to the

children

watching less

television

.

Additionally

, the other disadvantage is that some of the programs or advertisements telecasted

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television

are not meant for younger

children

. By watching these programs or advertisements, they

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to that

knowledge

which no one

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to provide to their young

children

as it can be harmful

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the

children

. One of the

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which I feel

inappropriate

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for

children

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Bull' advertisement. Spending more time

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watching

television

has a lot of advantages and disadvantages.

However

, I would like to conclude that

children

should watch

television

for limited hours as it will help them to take

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amount of

knowledge

and do physical activity as well.

Moreover

, they should only watch content

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is meant for

children

.