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Some teachers think that international student exchange programs would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

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These days, there are a number of opportunities for
students
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 to study abroad and participate in international
exchange
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programs
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. It has a lot of advantages for
students
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, as they can improve their language skills and gain more experience.   
Firstly
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, international
exchange
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 will be more useful for all
students
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.
Because when
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 they engage in conversations with their international peers, they will notice improvements in their speech and figure out the appropriate usage of vocabulary.
In addition
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, they will receive practice and active usage of
language
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the language
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 as they will be communicating with their native classmates, teachers, or even
neighbors
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 on a daily basis.
Students
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 will be able to develop both academic and general contexts of language.
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, international
exchange
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 will be more helpful in increasing the linguistic skills of
students
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.  
Secondly
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, international
exchange
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programs
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 would be more advantageous for
students
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 in order to widen their horizons. They will meet other people from
another culture
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other cultures
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 and
exchange
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 experiences. Through
this
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, they could become more creative and start thinking from another perspective.
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, when people start to meet new people and try a new country or lifestyle, they will be more ready for new adoption and will be more open-minded.
This
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 international
exchange
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 can have an influence on every aspect of life for
students
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.   In conclusion, international
exchange
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programs
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 are valid for all
students
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.
While
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 they will train and improve
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students
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 linguistic skills, they will
also
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 lead to open-mindedness from the student side and readiness for new adoptions.
As a result
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, I'm sure that there are advantages to international
programs
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