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Describe a restaurant or a café you like most. Write an essay about 250 words

#restaurant #café
Every so often, I catch glimpses of small niche stores selling god knows what when travelling around Hanoi and going places. One of the many stores I stumble upon and loved is
this
cozy
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cafe
 named Cong facing the calm, slow-moving Tay lake. When I
first
 discovered the
cafe
, I was thrilled. From afar, one could’ve mistaken for
vintage
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a vintage
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 cottage with greens, whites and blacks as its main
color
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. The
cafe
 was rather large compared to the average Vietnamese
ones
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one
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 and had a
second-story
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. It had wooden-framed windows, with the occasional run-down ones. Around and below the windows, plants were always present, whether it is slender, knotted vines or graceful flower pots. The
second
-story had a small balcony, occupied by mellow,
light-colored
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 wooden chairs and tables. The most unique and niche thing about the
cafe
however
 is the smell and
coziness
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. When I entered the
cafe
, I was immediately caught off-guard by the calming smell of freshly made coffee and
tropical
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 fruity smell of mangoes. The tables were decorated with miniature flower pots and the chairs and sofas topped with pillows were extremely comfy and relaxing to sit on. The lights weren’t the usually LED pure white ones but rather the warm reddish light.
Although
 I didn’t pay much attention to the menu, it still had diverse and distinctive drinks and snacks with things like tiramisu and original drinks. As a whole, I was very pleased with the
cafe
. The barista was very wholesome and welcoming and the whole vibe of it just makes me feel right at home.
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