In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

Technology has made wonders in every field same is with farming as many crops which are grown are hybrid species to increase the yield.Despite

of

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this

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advances it is observed that hunger is still one of the major

crisis

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prevalent throughout the world. In

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essay reasons and solutions to

aforementioned

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the aforementioned

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problem will be explained in subsequent paragraphs.

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with,

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and foremost reason for

above mentioned

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notion is

high

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costs of

agricultrual

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agricultural

produce rises due to increased investment.

Although

, it is crystal clear that to obtain higher produce hybrid seeds, good quality fertilisers, insecticides

etcetra

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etcetera

are required which are expensive resulting in

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hike of the

producrtion

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production

. To illustrate the cost of laboratory prepared seeds is

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much

more as compared to the normal seed and the type of nourishment and climate conditions required for its yield

also

need

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sum of money. in

this

whole

process

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the price of end product rises which makes it out of

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pocket

of a daily wage earner.

In addition

to

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, to tackle the problem it is important to decrease the production cost.

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can be done by shifting to

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of less attractive packaging material.

Furthermore

, branding of the product increases the cost so, to obtain lower prices farm yields should be sold directly from point of its production. Apart from

this

, a maximum selling price should be fixed by

government

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so that people can be protected from unnecessary taxes which are implemented by private industries. To sum up,

population

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a population

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which is below

poverty

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the poverty

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line is still not able to earn food for their families even after the increased

produce

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and

this

problem can be sorted out with joint efforts of

public

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and government.