Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

With the development of

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and industry, more than ever governments are witnessing the phenomenon of urbanization. The resulting overcrowded urban areas,

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, are far from being peaceful places. In fact, these are turning into hostile areas where

pollution

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and

crime

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are two of the main

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essay, I will assess them, alongside proposing possible solutions. Two of the main

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emerging from urban enlargement are

crime

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and

pollution

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. More than ever, in an overpopulated environment, young people struggle to find a stable occupation,

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devoting themselves to

crime

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. In fact, the

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of petty criminals, as well as that of burglars under 20 years of age, is steadily increasing proportionally to the inhabitants of the city centres.

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, urban spreading is increasing the traffic rate and air

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, since most people have to move from downtown to the city centre.

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, on average, a car owner in New York spends about three hours per day in

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traffic jam and that, given the total

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of registered cars in the district, gives the idea of the total gas emissions. It is clear

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, that overpopulation is leading to more

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and car

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. To tackle these issues, it will be of utmost importance to adopt

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security measures together with improving the public transport.

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, the government should warrant police

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in the slums, as well as convicting criminals with heavier sentences,

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will strongly reduce violence in the streets. A clear example of that can be found in South Korea where the establishment of death sentences has reduced the

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of crimes by 10%. The

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step, meaning less air

pollution

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and gas emissions, will be improving the

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of railways and bus lines, alongside reducing the journeys’ delays. In

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way, many workers would find it more convenient to opt for public transport. Citizens should,

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, tend to prefer public transport, even when uncomfortable. In fact, even many cinema icons are standing up and calling everybody to do their part at best to reach a superior goal. Through these interventions, the odds of improving the standards of living are quite favourable. In conclusion, while urbanization may seem a favourable condition, many

problems

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are emerging, like street violence and

environment

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damage. In

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essay, I assessed the causes of these

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, as well as the possible intervention to restore a good environment.