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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should you pay for this care , the government or the family.

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After reaching old old
age
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people
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 often go to old
age
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 homes and health care workers
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 as nurses and caregivers are there to look after them. In ,Britain
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 is a very common practice.
Government
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 is responsible to pay for the expenses of old
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people
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 I think it is good if the
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 is paying for the old
age
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people
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 of the country. In
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 recent survey which was conducted by the national survey of Britain, the data shows that only 30 per cent of old
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people
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 are there in Britain out of which 15 per cent live with their families and the other 15 per cent old ao to old
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 homes because either they don't have a family to look after them or their family doesn't want them to stay with them.
Government
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 should pay the expenses of old
age
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people
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 because when these
people
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 were young they contributed
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 the development of the country by paying taxes on time which has benefited the
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 in maintaining the infrastructure. These old
people
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 when we're young earned regular wages which again contributed to the rotation of the money cycle.
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 we why when they turn old and have no one to pay for their bills
government
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 should pay for their expense. The ones who still have a family should receive a fixed amount from their families because they are
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 responsible to take care of the old member of their house. So they should
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 contribute to paying the bills of their oldest family member. Every family has a different way of earning and a different number of resources a few of them earn very low or a basic wage which is not enough because there are so many tax deductions in their salaries. To sum up, I would like to say that it is not the sole responsibility of the
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 to pay bills of old
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people
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 so their families should
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 contribute a little in paying their expenses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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