In some countries, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries, adults always tell

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if there is a will”. To clarify, those

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are told a belief that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. But, what is it true? Is it good if those

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message. The two main advantages are that

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message could create encouragement for doing best of

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and positive attitude toward themselves.

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, people at a young age encourage themself when they are working on something.

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, teenagers force themself to study harder and harder to get good grades since their parents say that they can do it.

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, the youths would feel positive toward themselves. To illustrate, those youths are told that they can accomplish whatever they want many times.

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makes them positively think that they are smart to achieve everything and live their lives with positive energy.

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has some disadvantages in terms of creating false

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and mental

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of all, telling teenagers that they can do anything is a false thing since there is something which requires not only trying hard but

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talent.

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, becoming a singer, musician, and artist. Another drawback is that teenagers can experience a mental breakdown when they realize that they could not achieve their goal.

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, a student in Korea made suicide after receiving bad grades since he tried hard to study. In conclusion, telling young people that they can accomplish anything if they try hard enough has both benefits and drawbacks.

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it can create

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's encouragement and positive thoughts. It creates a wrong belief and disappointment toward

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