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Nowadays some people have anti-social behavior and lack respect to others. What are the reasons? What are solutions?

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Anti-social and disrespectful
behaviour
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 is pervasive currently, which severely affects social stability. In
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 phenomenon and solutions to reverse the trend will be discussed.
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 of all, the wide gap between rich and poor leads to rising in anti-social
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, as the wealth gap arouses impoverished
people
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’s resentful feelings. Some
governments
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 are unable to provide a comprehensive benefits system or are the lack
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policies of income redistribution,
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 leaving many
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 living on a low income. Those stricken by poverty often have to struggle with basic needs, gradually becoming hopeless and distrusting the government.
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, they may commit offences
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 as destroying public facilities to vent their anger to the authorities or show hostility to society
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 due to their envy.
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, media is another cause of disruptive
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. Nowadays, more news agencies tend to report sensational crime stories in order to increase their audiences, and meanwhile, increasing movies and series are willing to involve more violent images since the strong stimulation can catch
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’s eyes, which means
people
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’s frequent exposure to violent content. When the trend continues,
people
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 gradually recognize violence as an acceptable way of releasing negative emotions and settling conflicts, and they may view
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 aggressive anti-social
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 as symbols of cool personal characters as well, so an attempt to imitate is commonplace. Efforts from
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 can tackle
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 problem to some extent. They can raise taxes on higher earners and make full use of them to enlarge the welfare expenses, in order to narrow the wealth disparity. In
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 way, the disadvantaged
people
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 can feel the care from
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 and thereby comply with rules to show respect to the society from the bottom of their hearts. What’s more,
governments
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 can enhance supervision
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 media.
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, adding more audits on the content of film and television productions or making new policies of stricter standards of violent acts can be an effective measure. To summarize,
governments
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 and media are two main reasons resulting in the overall growth in anti-social and impolite
behaviour
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.
Governments
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' actions can help address the issue.
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