Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that well-developed

countries

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should support poorer cities by giving different types of support since simply giving

money

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does not solve anything. In

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opinion. One rationale of offering developing

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other forms of assistance

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of

money

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is that giving

money

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is a short term solution. It is obvious that authorities demand a huge amount of

money

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to invest in one large scale project

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as upgrading the transport systems or building

school

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schools

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or

hospitial

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hospital

. As a consequence, the financial aid, which is given at that moment, can only be able to make effort in one project.

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also

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mean

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that since dealing with poverty is costly

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a long period, local government urge for more

money

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, and by donating cash in that way

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problem will never be solved.

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, there are different solutions, which is more practical, that rich

countries

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are able to operate so as to help reducing poverty in poorer nations. Developed

government

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governments

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should come up with long term practices,

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example

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generate job

opportunites

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opportunities

in their

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or create chances for commercial coordination between two regions.

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, in

labor

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exportation,

well

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well-devolped

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devolped

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developed

cities can deal with the developing

countries

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to send workers to work in physical and low-income positions while providing them with housing and other

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fees. In conclusion,

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offering financial aids can,

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some point

somepoint

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, help underdeveloped nations in solving their problems about poverty, there are more practical methods in doing it. In the future, with the opportunities, given to the

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world, the starvation and unemployment issues can no longer be

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available.