In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

There is a phenomenon happening in some countries where

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tend to go to large markets that are located out of

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instead

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of going to shop in small-

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centre shops. And

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phenomenon leads to the small market going broke and increasing the production of cars because the public would like to go with cars. I think

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phenomenon obtains more drawbacks rather than benefits.

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, increasing the number of cars is followed by gaining the consumption of oil.

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, the oil industry will expand significantly in the future. Even though many people do not notice the drawbacks and tend to fulfil their needs and wishes, the enormous negative effects will happen in the near future.

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, the small

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near the capital

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of West Java cannot develop properly because

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prefer to fulfil their needs in the metropolis.

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, the facilities of a small

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will not be developed and impact the income of the

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. It is because they cannot maximise their local production.

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, both the

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and

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cannot be independent and will rely on the other

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. To illustrate, the way to get out of

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problem, the mayor has to gain the quality of local stores and provide convenient access to the public as much as possible. Communities will prefer to go shopping in the

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if it can be followed with good facilities and raw material availability. To conclude, in my opinion, it is obvious that there are plenty of disadvantages rather than advantages when

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depend on another

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.

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, it can be followed by other crucial problems.