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Describe a restaurant or a café you like most. Write an essay about 265 words

#restaurant #café
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My favourite
restaurant
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 is in Ngoc Lam Market. It’s located near Song Hong and it’s
also
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 pretty big compare to other restaurants
in
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on
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 the same road. The
restaurant
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called
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is called
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 Bao Lam
restaurant
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 because it is the name of the person who set up the business. The
restaurant
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have
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 2 parts: the outside and the inside of
the
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apply
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restaurant
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. It
have
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 2 parts to please both
type
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types
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 of customers , who like quite and who like noisy sound and view of the river.
With the
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The
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 main
restaurant
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 , it
built
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is built
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by
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of
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 wood and glass and at the entrance, right underneath your feet is a beautiful aquarium full
with
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of
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many
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colorful
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colourful
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 fish. Inside the
restaurant
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, there are many lights, which make the whole
restaurant
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 look bright. There are
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 a lot of square wooden tables and many comfy chairs. About the food , the
restaurant
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 usually
serve
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serves
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 lunch and dinner, they only
serves
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serve
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 breakfast
in
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 some occasions. Their foods taste really good, the steak impressed me the most. I
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also
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am also
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 a huge fan of the sandwiches and the vegetable salad made by the
restaurant
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. I often go to the
restaurant
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 by the sunset and offer steak or salad every
sunday
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Sunday
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. I
also
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 eat in the
restaurant
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in
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at
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the
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apply
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noon
sometime
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sometimes
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 with my friends. I think that my main reason why I like the
restaurant
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because
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is because
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 not only their food taste good but the staff members
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also
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are also
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 incredibly friendly with customers.
Everytime
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 I eat in the
restaurant
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 I feel satisfied
about
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 the food and the service.
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