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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, the world is quickly
adapting
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 the technological changes as they are labour-saving and
time efficient
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. There are many concerned individuals who feel that we should not totally depend on
machine based
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 drivers. Others,
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 believe that robots are safe and well-planned as compared to human begins. I completely agree with the former statement and in
this
 essay, I will support my view with examples.
Firstly
, one of the major advantages of
this
 robotic invention is that humans are no longer required to learn driving lessons. Previously, when we want to travel by
cars
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car
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 or any other
vehicals
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vehicles
vehicle
 we need to hire a driver or we should have driving knowledge but now without having a driver we can enjoy our
car
 rides. One
such
 example is the Tesla cars. Tesla is
the
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vahicle
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vehicle
 manufacturing company and recently they have introduced a robotic
car
 where
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the robot
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robot
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robots
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 can drive the
car
 and they have been programmed in
such
 a way that they can even identify the obstacles across the road.
As a result
, we can save
time
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 and
efforts
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 of a
car
 operator.
On the other hand
, we can not completely trust
such
vehicals
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vehicles
vehicle
 because even though these
machinaries
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machines
machineries
 are well programmed and trained but
at
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 the end, they are machines and if any program fails
then
 it is highly inconvenient and it can even risk human lives.
For instance
, when the Tesla company was testing his model, a robot hit
the
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 obstacle as he was
unble
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unable
 to fetch the object.
Similarly
, human drivers are more
experience
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experienced
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 and
at
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 critical conditions, they are more dependable.
Moreover
,
such
 robotic models are costly and
thus
 a common man could not
affort
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afford
 these transport services. To sum up, despite there are many reasons why we should support
driveless
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driverless
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 transports, I'm inclined to think that they are not trustworthy and they need more testing and training before launching to markets.
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